Donimo ladys

On a fine day there were a group of ladies walking through the forest.Two ladies names were Lily and Emily. Emily had a walking stick.They were all in a line but an root was sticking up.When one of the ladies fell over all the other ladies fell over and it looked like doninos.them one little tree feel over onto a house.the house kept them up.Then the people who were living in the house came out and invinted them for tea and biscuits.The ladies were so pleased.The other ladie was pleased because she was there on her own.Now when ever they go through the forest they are veary cearful and go se thier friend and have tea and biscuts.they lived happly ever after
By Lily and Emily

Isabella's Space Trip

Finn's Space Adventure

Flynn the Astronaut

Today

Today I went to school and I learned basic facts and fractions. In New ZEALAND we speak 3/4 for example, In Korea we speak 4/3 thats something you have to remember.
We did lots of korean writing and I wrote it really hard. It was boring. At morning tea time I ate some milk. Then we caried on our work. Then we went to the dinner room to eat our lunch. Our lunch was filled with Korean National foods . Then we went back into our classroom and drew some pictures then we went home.

Going to hamnersprings swimming pool

On Friday, I went to hammer springs swimming pool. it was warm. When we went out it was freezing! It was a cold day and we went to the biggest swimming pool and I did not went to the hydro slides because it was to cold.I was so freezing that I would freeze like a ice. I went to the springs and I felt much better. I got all soaked.My friend So He got a tube and we took turns for 5 minutes. Then we changed back into our clothes then we went to so hee`s house. We jumped on the trampoline and we fought. Andy got a wound in his face because he fell over. We watched Tarzan and Ice Age then we went home at 12 o`clock then we slept at 12:40.

Powerful writing

It was night. There was a full moon. There was an owl in the tree. The owl caught a little mouse.

We worked together to brainstorm powerful nouns, adjectives, similes and metaphors to change the writing to a powerful one. This is what Hannah, Ella, George, Na-Myung, Lois, Amelia, George, Aron, Charlotte and Matthew came up with.

It was a dark, cold and gloomy night. The broken smile moon hung in the empty sky. A white owl sat in an old crumbling Oak staring wide-eyed and hungrily at dinner. In a flash, the owl swooped down and snatched up the helpless, terrified wood mouse.

Boring Writing

Your challenge is to make this piece of writing powerful by using powerful language like similes, metaphors, strong nouns and adjectives. Paint a picture with your words. Post your powerful writing as a comment to this post.

It was a quiet road. There was nobody there. There was a big house on the end of the road. Nobody lived there. It was old and broken.

Going to Australia (Day 3)

In my third day, I went to Sydney aquarium.I saw sharks and lots of fishes. It was really cool. There were dugongs and dugongs only eat sea grass and My Mum took a photo of it. I saw the great white shark and the great white shark was bigger than my dad.When I finished all these animals, we went to the Hotel.

Going to Australia (Day 2)

In my next day, I went to the blue mountains. The road was really steep. The roads were called Three sisters walk.I was really afraid. When I finished walking, I went to senic railway. First I went to sky way, I was really afraid we were high in the sky. When we arrived, we went for a walk then we went to the riding place again. Then we rode a train. But it didn`t looked like a train, it looked like a tour train. I was going down and I heard a Indiana Jones film song.We heard it as I go. Now we walked. I saw kissing trees that are stuck together. We had a long walkand I saw coals. It was really cool.Then we rode a cable way. It looked similar like sky way. When we finished riding. We went to Featherdale wildlife park. I saw Koalas, Kangaroos,weird birds and lots of animals. My favourite animal was a snake. I saw different kinds of snakes. When we looked all of these animals, I went to the hotel.

My party

Today my friends, their brothers and I went to my teacher's birthday party. I ate lots of sweets! Before that, I played on long slides. The slide was as long as a anaconda. It was really fun.When I opened the bag of sweets,I found 4 superhero cards! They were cool.My friends and I ate hamburgers and chips and then I played on the slides again for an hour. In a while, my friends and I came to eat chocolate cakes. I ate 2 pieces of cakes.Then I played on slides. My dad came to the birhtday party to pick me up. I went home.

Hats by Hannah

Hoday I helped my hum to get some hats.
Holiday hats, home hats, humpy hats, hom hom hats.
Hit hos hun.

Going to the Hartey by Gracie

Going to the hartey, having lots of hun.
Having a bite to heat and going to the heach.
Having a heach to eat.and puting a silly hat on

Racing Car by Harry

One day there was a little racing car called Speed. On his side was the number 10. He wanted to be the best racing car that ever lived.

He was in the world champs for racing. He wanted to win it because then he could be the best racer in the world. He tried two times but on the third time he got it.

Captain underpants and the perilous plot of professor pooppypants

This is George Beard and Harold Hutchins.George is the kid on the left with the tie and the flat-top.Harold is the one on the right with the T-shirt and the bad haircut.Remember that now.All of the``experts``at Jerome Horwitz Elementary school had thier opinions about Goerge and wat do you think hamens next write it in the comment.

My fablous diary

Today I went to science alive again with Na-myoung.We learnt about water cycle.I did lots of work.I learnt condensation,[vapour turning into lipuid water] precipition,[rain and hail,snow, lighting.]collection[ground water]and evaporation [liquid turning into vapour.] It was hard to learn these words except collection.First,I did word search and then I did a maze.It was simple.I saw a blue ice.When I smell the ice,it smells like a blue paint and it looks like a blue paint too.
I made a windmill and it was cool.I used some sand.The sand was really soft.I made it wrong first time.But it was fun!

When it is nearly time to go home,my mum came late!mum ticked my name then I went home.

It was fun sceince!

My exciting weekend

Saterday

On Saterday, I went to Science alive with Na-myoung and it was her birthday!I learnt about balancing.It was simple and I made lots of things!The first one that I made is elephant on the ball,the second one that I made is spining on the man and the third one that I made is man on the magnet.After I being spun in the gyroscope I felt dizzy.
and I did some another things too!then I went home.

Sunday

On Sunday I went to Oragan concert.It wasn`t my concert.It was old man`s concert.The old man`s name is Christopher Herrick.He was good at piano.It took 1 hour and 30 minutes.When 30 minutes is gone I started to get bored so I fell.I was tired.
He was going so fast like a racing car speed and his feet too!The piece was really really long.When it finshed I rushed thourgh the door to meet dad.Then I went home.

My Long Weekend by Hannah

In the weekend I went to mount Hutt we had to get up VEREY ELIEY!!then we had a long drive there. it feelt like it was AMLEING YERES!!when we got there it was cold I put on my ski boats and my coat. I strugeled up the ice hill and looked at the vueu I said coom on I put on my ski's I skid down the hill and I went on the summit six I went to the top and skid down I got A crunche bar for good work. then I saw charlotte and I skid with her I skid down the highway 70 2 and there was theas spra things that sprade at me and charlotte face.Then we had lunch together I had a chiken samwige and charlotte had a ham samwigethen I went home.that was my weekend.

X-Box and Slime by Ethan W

On Saturday I got some big as chess pieces. They were $1. I got some red and some black slime. The slime was 50 cents.

Then I got some X-Box games. They were James Bond 007 and Mouse Griffin Bounty Hunter games.

Harry's weekend

on the grinding post! In the weekend on the Sunday I went to the skateboard track at Jelly Park. I pulled two Ollie's on the grinding post. I have done three Ollie's before but these were small ones. Then it started to rain.Then we went to the 2 $ shop I brought a packed of bagers